All Comments on 'Melody's Open Invite Gangbang Ch. 16'

I was disappointed to read there will be no karma to end the story. What a sad girl Melody has become

I was disappointed to read there will be no karma at the end. No Justice for Melody

I've been checking literally every day to see if this story was getting updated, thankyou so much for coming back to carry it on!

This isn't jerk off material, this is the modern day Marquis de Sade.

I was disappointed to see there will be no karma in the story.

Thank you for continuing this story! I check back in often, waiting for a new chapter!

I hate all men in the story, and knowing that nobody's gonna be punished for ruining an innocent person, I'll stop reading and pretend that Bruce discovered who set up everything from the start, then he will do the same thing that happened to Melody to that POS and the crew he hired. Then, Bruce will be prosecuted and will go to jail for life, and Melody somehow will get all his money and will live reclusive in a private island with a perfect beach, legally changing her name and paying to be forgotten so all traces about her would be erased. Not believable, but it's satisfying to me. And I don't judge people that get turned on reading the story, it's fiction, I just hope that something like this never happens IRL, and that they don't wish that something like this would happen.

Nice work . Good to have you back.

Well, I have been watching for a new chapter almost every day. I too wish that there would be a good ending for Melody. Too bad that Bruce let the cat out of the bag and told her about Spokane. It would have been a lot better for her to find out, at the last minute, that her last gangbang would be in her home. Since this story is not going to end nicely, or one that give some little revenge, I would like to have Melody end her own life on her own terms. Let her finally have some time alone with just herself. Give her something that she can finally get some peace and dignity. Maybe Bruce will give her a nice funeral. I was hoping that Bruce will finally release her and give her some huge monetary compensation for the ton of money that he made from her torments. Oh well, I guess I am a hopeless romantic.

Fuck karma and justice. One of the things that makes this story so good is that there is no happy ending for Melody

Awesome!

Ignore the weird guy who commented three times about no karma. All of love this story. Can’t wait to see where it goes!

Well done! No karmic retribution required or desired. Much better this way.

I'm still hoping for karmic justice. 177013 never again. You've got me hooked to this disturbing crazy escapade.

One question: What is supposed to be Melody's natural hair colour?

Fuck yes. The best series on literotica is back, and with a bang ;p. Glad to see the story continue, and can’t wait for the next chapter.

Just like in the story, I check every day waiting for a that new melody content, can't wait to see what the next posts have in store.

Please ignore the fools asking for karma. Your stories are brilliant without it

I let out a little happy squee when I saw this had been updated and immediately grabbed my vibrator, thank you so much for updated this is my favourite series on this site, can't wait to see what else you have in store for this whore x

Damn, this one was too fucking depressing to be hot.

just wondering what could be next after her homecoming

This was an amazing series and well written. Really good job….can’t wait for more!

I would still like it if she could escape this by getting help and maybe after a year she cannot hold back anymore of her own depraved mind and she initiates another sexual degeneration by her own doing. Step by step. Depravity by depravity. Maybe even remembering her dad what he did to her.

What happen to Brian? Bring him back and let him tell Melody what really happened that night. :)

Love it! Been following for a long time.

Gotten boring and repetitive. We get it, everything sucks for her. It's unrelenting misery porn. What's the endgame? Where is this story going?

The best perverse story I have ever read in my life. If I would have been born as I woman, this would definitely be my darkest secret fantasy I wished to come true for real... I love this sickening vulgar humiliation...I’ve always been craving to become fully exposed on the Internet (entirely recognisable, totally vulnerable, explicitly naked and in the most extreme compromising way possible,...with all my most personal intimate information deliberately made public to be spread around forever)...To be used as a worthless slut and grow into a useless cum eating whore (insatiable, always craving for lust and hot sperm) for the rest of my life,...completely deprived of all my dignity,...to be used and abused with no mercy anytime, anywhere without any respect or restraints,...This wonderful written story describes word by word how I would voluntarily and deliberately would love to ruin my life to the fullest,...and to become a worthless cumdumpster whose horniest desire has always been to get pounded in all my three filthy fuck holes out of free will... The fulfilment of an irresistible, extraordinary and addictive dream coming true...at last...to be pointed at on the streets, in shops, on the bus...nowhere to hide...spotted and recognised day and night, humiliated in public over and over again...just everything I have always wanted to happen. It is my most precious uncontrollable wish to finally transform myself into the most disgustingly sleaziest ordinary sex slave... To be fucked abundantly for free for as long as you desire, to have no other choice than fulfilling your filthiest perversive and sadistic desires without hesitation... and with pleasure to satisfy you all...TheEvilWithin

Fantastic story. Loving every word of it. Great job, cannot wait for the next chapter !

What about dogs or dog

Great as always. Always great when you do another chapter. Thanks for the hard work!

You need help!!!!

I'm so happy

I'm so happy

I would like to sincerely thank the Author for giving us updates of his intentions with this multi-part story . That desire makes him a VERY rare person here on Literotica. Few things are so frustrating for a readership as not knowing whether there will ever be another installment for this or that story series. And you all know what I am talking about. There are TOO many authors that don't care to provide their readership with that update. And I want to high-lite and Thank one here that DOES care. And does provide that update.

The series itself is of course great, and must take a tremendous amount of energy to write. Be certain that I and others here appreciate tremendously, the type of person you are, to provide us with an update like you do, AND the effort of the writing itself. Truely, thank you so much good Author !

Finally got caught up after making several "donations" to Melody along the way. The wait for the next chapter is going to be difficult.

I know some people are upset by the revelation that there will be no final act miracle of karmic justice, or putting the series down as nothing more than relentless misery porn; but for some of us, the suffering and misery are what we're here for.

It would be horrifyingly upsetting if this were real, but part of the point of fiction is that it isn't real. More than fiction, this is a work of fantasy, one of the most depraved, nightmarish fantasies I've come across which gives it it's own unique appeal. I'm sorry for anyone getting turned off by this series because that just isn't their thing, everyone has different interests and tolerances for different things, but I say stick to your vision if that's what excites you and got you into writing this in the first place

Now we’re starting to ease into the scat. I love it. She’s just steps away from becoming a human toilet.

Chapter 17 soon?

“Please Sir, can I have another” 🙏🏼🥣

Anyone else only come on here to see if there is another story? Cannot just be me 🤣

More please !!! You've got yourself a winner here.

Looking forward to more. Just as a bit of feedback, I really enjoy the scenes where Melody is speaking to people while she’s being fucked or made to do something disgusting. I’m not saying when she goes into subspace and just begs everyone to destroy her. I mean the parts when she’s still feeling humiliated and awkward or nervous and sad. Like during Chapter 4 when she’s talking about getting assfucked or Ch 07 when she urgently requests more time for her to get ready.

I’m genuinely sticking with this because I’m hoping she’ll be saved soon, I know it’s impossible cause the writer is a crazed cruel man but still 😭

Need more please good sir.

We need to see Melody paraded in front of people covered in shit and forced to beg for more of it.

Since she's returning to her hometown. You should have a school reunion where everybody she knew is there. Maybe the bf she thought she had before he betrayed her. Maybe she meets the guy that started all this.

I would also like a new story. Maybe one that isn't so crazy as this one. You ever thought about keeping it to one location? Maybe a Nurse that gets fucked by everyone, including the patients. Maybe a lawyer that has to fuck everyone including the judge. Maybe just a high school girl that gets fucked by everyone including the teachers. Or a teacher that becomes the school's cum dumpster.

Thankfully this garbage has stopped and won't ever return

More please!

Need more of Melody Ainsley!

@Anon ("Thankfully this garbage has stopped and won't ever return")

What sort of joker goes out of its road to diss something that others come here to read, 'cause we like it ?

Truly, that's not healthy, for like real ...

Anon, please learn to turn the channel, or leave the room and find another one, when something displeases your tastes ... all of us have done that on occasion

... seriously ... life is too short ... find something you like and stick with it (and ignore all the rest)

Does the author still check in here from time to time? Need more of this masterpiece.

When is the next installment. Getting almost a year. I think it is time ton introduce melody to bow bow publicly.

@anon - this crappy story is never coming back thankfully

I am trying my best to be patient as I know this isn't your top priority in life. However, you have struck gold with this story and you have many fans awaiting the next chapter. Please continue with your efforts soon.

How do you know author isn't coming back?

Please give us a finale!!!

Maybe you should get a ghostwriter? Like, you outline the chapters and have someone else who can write in your style and has more time to put out chapters more consistently?

So I definitely need more of this... Would love to see more of Christy as well!

Does this remind anyone else of Cody Lane?

My pussy would like you to publish another chapter so I can massacre it to some new filth.

I agree. My pussy is dripping thinking about what comes next for our girl Melody. Give me something to change the sheets for.

Just a thought about Melody's return to Spokane... work in a new high school being built and have her "reunion" in the gym of the old school.

Please continue this story soon. Your fans deserve a solid ending.

I hope her mother gets slapped and spat at for having such a whore daughter. Would like to see her own mother publicly slap and spit in her face all the while disowning her for good. Just like the worthless whore she is

Please give all of us fans a gift for Christmas... another chapter.

It has been over a year since your last chapter. I'm trying to be patient but please, please let us know what has become of Melody.

I feel like something happened to the author 😢

Where gave you gone Melody?

How about bringing in 2024 with a bang? A gang bang for Melody that is.

The new year brings new hope for an update on Melody. You have something great going here and you owe it to yourself to see it through. Wish you the best for the new year.

The idea of a new high school being built sounds exciting. Just imagine all the trouble Melody would find in the hallways and classrooms and locker rooms.

Awesome story. Please keep it going. At least let your fans know you are still with us.

Where have you gone Orpheus? Please let us know if you are still with us.

Sincerely,

All your fans

I'm seriously thinking some crazy fan did something to him. Someone posted with certainty that he'd be gone forever a few months back.

Honestly, I don‘t know. It takes a very depraved fantasy to keep writing something like this over the course of 5+ years. Obviously, the writing is good and you have fully committed to the premise of your story. But in all the years I have been reading literotica, I have never once read something that comes close to this level of depravity and simply wrong. If literotica allows this to be posted, there is really no limit to what they will allow. And I sincerely hope for you that what you have been thinking for so many years now is not somehow finding a way to turn into reality.

Last chapter. Author committed self homicide... Saw the news online awhile ago.

Got any sort of proof for that claim anon?

You have over 1000 followers waiting patiently for the next chapter. Please at least say something even if you aren't completing this incredible story. Maybe someone else could pick it up though I doubt they could do it justice.

Agree with the previous comment by Anonymous that you have 1000 followers and the rest of the comment.

Where are you.. Are you okay..? What's happening.. Keep us updated...

Sorry to go AWOL. I am NOT dead. My life/mindset is in a much different place than it was when I was more actively writing this story. You have to understand it's hard to keep the motivation for something like this going for seven plus years, even with breaks.

I should have probably wrapped it up a while ago just to give readers some sense of closure, but I have this outline I was planning on working through to end this story the way I wanted, and obviously it has just taken me forever to get there. I still occasionally try to work on it but quite honestly the inspiration is just rarely and barely there anymore.

I'll leave it up to a vote for those of you still wanting more. Should I try to just finish what I started myself, albeit in a maybe condensed form (and keeping in mind it may still take me another year...) or give my outline to another decent writer who is willing to take it on? I am fine with either option.

Again, sorry to leave you all hanging.

I say you do it. Condensed or not. Thanks for all you’ve done. It’s been a ride. Damn!!

Please finish it. It needs to come from you to sound right. And I’ll be waiting here with my hand on my pussy until the next chapter arrives.

Hi. Glad to hear you are well. Yes just a quick synopsis with her being used my aids infested hobos outside a Miley concert.

Well, I think you should publish whatever you've written so far and your outline(synopsis), since everyone's been waiting for too long!

I do want you to bring a conclusion to your own series. But if you can't find inspiration or think it'll take too much time, I am not against letting another good writer continue.

Or, why don't you let your readers write scenes or their own finale based on your synopsis, gather these works and publish one big fanmade compilation?

Before finishing your work(albeit condensed), you should publish whatever you've written so far and your outline for making all the readers wait so long

I would much rather see you complete this masterpiece yourself. You have raised the bar for this type of story and you should be the one to complete it. I would like to make a suggestion though... It would be intriguing if Melody's return to Spokane included a "visit" to her old high school, possibly working in that a new high school had been built and the old one is vacant.

I’d rather see you vision of the end. Condensed or not

I say give it to a trusted writer. I know it is your vision, but if you created an ending that feels forced or disingenuous it may make you feel worse.

Pls share the Synopsis. We can just fill it in with our imagination in the meantime.

I am glad that your still alive. Please give us a synopsys of the planned end of the story. Other people can continuing the story if they want, maybe with different endings, but we should at least know the original ending!

Writing a long story is tough, writing long dark stories is toughest, and the toughest of both options is writing dark porn for years. I hope you're doing well, Orpheus.

I think entrusting your story to a writer that you find fitting is the best course in this situation. Of course, I don't know details of the situation, but there's no point in pressing yourself to write this piece of darkness, especially if your mental state is just not ready for it anymore. It's all human. You have done well.

Have you considered Patreon for motivation 😊

Just give us what you got and move on, both what's written and the synopsis/outline. If someone wants to take it on, they can, and at this point it's probably healthiest for everyone involved.

🙏🙏🙏if you do get to finishing a last chapter please include more juicy foot content. Maybe shoes always with stinking cum 🤤

If you ever need an inspiration to continue, my suggestion is to just dig deeper into Melody's Highschool life. Her memories may become altered in the face of her never-ending humiliation, until Melody herself is convinced that she was the worst slut all along and rumors spread by her bullies were true. Through this she may reach the stage of ultimate submission Bruce is aiming for. How about finally revealing her breakdown audio in Highschool reunion?

But still, I am just dying to see your original synopsis right now. Want to see what fate awaits Melody at the end of her hellish journey.

I have been checking every day for a long time to see if this has been updated. Nothing hits quite like this story. I personally would love to see anything you have written so far or some kind of outline or synopsis. I wouldn't mind seeing another writer or writers take a crack at the ending. Almost like a choose your own adventure thing. Who can come up with Melodys ultimate punishment? Most people on Literotica aren't as good at writing as you though especially stories like this.

Any of the ladies on here want to trade Melody fan fiction?

Please release the Synopsis. Were starving here

Free her somehow save her and then because she already has been to depraved she slowly on her own let her depravity take over so she will always know that this is who she is and only person to blame is herself.

“Any of the ladies on here want to trade Melody fan fiction?”

YES!

Say yes to the fan fiction too.

There should be a forum or something where we can share our own conclusions or fanfictions to Melody. (Still craving synopsis)

Have the story end with this being Melody writing fiction about her own fantasy her being glad that such things aren't possible outside of her imagination.

Fan fiction that fills in some of gaps and/or adds scenes between chapters would be amazing too.