All Comments on 'Melted'

That was one hot story! Loved the humor!

Hot? I'm still trying to shake off the image of a woman wearing a brazier (sic) - now that's hot!

that was a hot little story there!

I adore BW/WM stories. I have yet to make one myself and I'm a little intimidated because there are already so many wonderful stories out there!

This one was particularly hot. Nothing sexier than a shleppy guy who eats out of the ice-cream box! I hope to read more from you.

I'm only taking off for mispelling. LOL. That was a nice job, fuck anybody else and their hangups.

HOT!!!!

IF KYLE WAS SMART! He wouldn't let his woman give "HIS" chocolatey goodness away to another man! He better claim her quick, before she gets in to deep with this other guy. 5 stars for the content of the sexual act.

I agree he better claim her asap! Before he misses out on that GOOD-n-PLENTY!