by M4bloke
This has been a great story - I hope you plan to take things forward and write more
it's been a very clever story, brilliantly written. the dialogue is life like. I hope you continue to write this story - after all - you must have close to 30 years of more stories. and i'm sure many of them are just waiting for you to tell them!
I've complimented you on the quality of this tale before. Who can say where the modern fairy tale starts and fact fades out? I think that's what makes it special. The excellent writing, including the sexual encounters, and good plotting just make it work perfectly.
This story is a well-done story of sex, success and human frailty all written in an entertaining style. I have found myself, tearing up at parts, getting hard at parts and yelling at the characters at times. Thank goodness the story comes to a resting point here; I thought I would have to read all night long. That said, I am very curious as to where the characters will take the story in the next major chapter now that our love birds are married and living such extraordinarily successful lives. Oh, that I could have such fun, success and sex with so many characters blended into my life.