All Comments on 'Memories of Her'

First story!

Feel free to let me know here in the comments any constructive criticisms. This is my first attempt at this that I’m willing to share, and want to get better.

Too short to be worth rating really. It's just a couple of incidents plus some flashbacks. As a first part of a longer story, I can't say that it encouraged me to await chapter 2.

Not a story. Not even part of a story. LW category in any case.

Not badly written but just a snippet. Not a story yet. Just a back story within a backstory looking to become a story. And to be a romance there had to be some romance. None here yet. Expand on this into a future story leading somewhere. Keep trying as you seem to be competent but you stopped way too soon here.

It was good until you left us hanging. It was good for a part 1