All Comments on 'Mental Domination Ch. 01: Ex-Boss'

Pretty good! Looking forward to a part 2 :)

Excellent first story, can't wait to see where you take it next. The premise is familiar, but your descriptions are quite good, the energy is there, and there are none of the grammar, spelling, and continuity issues which can break the mood.

Great first story. Well done!

Thanks for commenting guys. Glad you're liking it. I should have the second part uploaded by this weekend, then it's a few days for the site to publish it, so probably early next week for part 2.

Very erotic. Loved the revenge aspect.

Outstanding on your first try! I want you to think about how you're going to top this one. Okay, jk. I haven't read many mind control stories, and this one is a great start. RT.

I totally enjoyed what I’ve read so far. I’m hoping you will continue the story