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by Mister_B75

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Second person stories never flow well, and are a difficult read. The idea was good but the style isn’t for me.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great concept but the perspective was ‘off’ mostly due to changing pov both correct and incorrectly.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

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Hey there Kinksters! I am just your average gent with a kinky side that I like to explore! I have been a fan of this delightful site for years and I have finally decided to add a few stories of my own to the ever growing creative pool of kinky writings. I am a Dom at heart,...