All Comments on 'Metalwear Pt. 07'

Thanks for the story. Really interesting change of direction.

Thanks for finishing your story - as usual - but also again with enough open space for our own imagination of how it may continue for the characters of this tale. Although I have red this last part over 24 h ago, its still fresh in my mind and all the time thinking what to comment, but always shure I had to and I will, course You are one, if not eaven the famost author on this platform, not to say I found, until now , one of your submissions somewhere else under a different name. Hope your two new projects are new stories, being also published here and follow the usual line, with the detailed discriptions of the technics used. I am absolutely fastcinated about that as well as of the going of Your stories and can eaven identify myself - sometimes - with more than one character. So please keep on writing Your way and ignore some not so well comments, don't give up like other authors which also did awesome stories and quitt after just one harsh comment. Your almost dayly - sometimes twice ore more checking for new chapters - fan - JtL

I appreciate all comments. Thanks for taking the time to provide your input. The first part of one of my new stories has already been submitted. Of course, it's a totally different theme. Hopefully you'll enjoy it.

I loved the story as it is. Will you be continuing it if you get an idea about Kelly, Marla and Sammy going to Berlin. Marla could get Kelly and Sammy into BDSM lifestyle.

Thanks for the feedback. I have no plans for anything further on this story. I did consider following Kelly and Sammy. Perhaps, someday...

Great Story! Different, but still had a normalcy to it. There is so much more you could do with the suit and helmet. You could add e-stim to the breasts and groin for stimulation or punishment. I don't thing Marla would punish Kelly too much, but she sure would stimulate her! As for the helmet, you could make so the screen showed videos, or even hyno visuals and audios to make the wearer think more like a gynoid and less like a human. You could even put a vacuum pump in Sammy's breasts to make her breast fill the void and include a port for injections of hormones. So many options it would be easy to get carried away. Again, Great Story! Thank you

loved the whole saga but for the "hans gruber" bit yea die hard is on tv as i write this

"the end" sounds so final i can imagine sammy and kelly doing more trade shows as the gynoids maybe somehow caroline locks V in the suit for a while or sammy goes to help marla for a while maybe caroline offers to just rent sammy for a few days a month realizing she took him too far

Enjoyed the overall character progression, imperfect life and growth in realizing what's important to them. Marla went over the top a lot, and Kelly ended up with a lot of post rationalizations.

Especially in the beginning, I found the narrative speed a bit off putting. The type of stories that read more like an outline than describing a characters experience. But I grew more accustomed to your voice, and I think you got better with the time elapsed sections.