All Comments on 'Microchipped Human Toy'

by bobthebum

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

flat, boring and short.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Well, it has an interesting spin, but it absolutely needs more worked out details.

A_Winter94A_Winter9411 months ago

Certainly a potential beginning.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

"I typed 'please let this story be over' and then I felt much better."

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