All Comments on 'Midnight Move Ch. 03'

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cursrahcursrahover 1 year ago

I really like this story and can't wait for more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More, please.

Particularly i want to know what's with Raven.

16BattleshipGunner16BattleshipGunnerover 1 year ago

More pleases you have several subplots that you can keeping going with the story for a long time and not lose interest as I and sure others are drawn in to your charters. Keep up the good work.

Marvin2017Marvin2017over 1 year ago

We need to continue this.

How will things go on with Raven? When will Mike take on both the twins simultaneously? Mom’s getting old, how much longer will she perform? And the big question is when will they gain the attention of the law? Will it come about because of Emma/Amanda’s business, or will the IRS sink their filthy claws into them before they slink off to Costa F-in Rica?

I want answers, dammit! 😃

5 ⭐️ all the way

nermienermie11 months ago

really enjoed the series and cant wait for the next chapter

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For now I will leave the option for comments on the story, please be kind. Constructive criticism is welcome, but not rude comments. I am not a professional writer, so don't expect that level from me. I write for me and if you like what I submit, please let me know. If not, th...

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