by MarshalMarmont1815
All that fucking and no pregnancy!!! Come have the women ask for it and make it happen damn it.
Should have been in incest stories, sorry but these type of stories I don’t like!
Yeah, this should go in the incest category or AT LEAST have an incest story tag. That's a no from me, dog.
Repulsive. Surely a parody of all the bad sex stories ever written.
Derek's vocabulary is severely limited: shit, fuck, hell. The author lacks imagination, and seems confused about what's anatomically possible.
In sum, this story is without redeeming literary, sexual, or social qualities.