All Comments on 'Military Hazing'

Obviously your not a Marine!

First of all, Crusader235, you don't know anything about me. Second, its a story set in outer space, so I think certain artistic liberties about the Corps are allowed. And third, "your" should be spelled "you're" as its a contraction of YOU and ARE. Thank you - fuck you - bye.

I mean, the fact that you have an NCO requesting a salute implies lack of military knowledge...

Other than that, the sexual hazing isn't unrealistic. I liked the twist of having it be female-on-female. Also liked the reluctant male inlvolved. I'd love to see sequels where he is forced to participate, or where the 1st Sergeant pegs him for being unwilling.

Lastly, I'd like to "experience" more as the reader. Get the reader more involved with the act. This got me interested, but didn't get me off.

The NCO is requesting a salute because she is on a power trip. I could have wrote her as a Major instead, but her doing that as a Sergeant is a real life mannerism that I put into the story.

that was hot as hell