All Comments on 'Mind Control Adventures Ch. 03'

He should try their asses next. Make mom suck him clean. Maybe use a belt on her for being a bitch

I’m really enjoying this story please keep this going.

please continue please

Hello everyone, this isn't the final chapter. I will write and make more of these stories soon. Keep an eye out for Chapter 4!!!

Fun story

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But how exactly does Charlotte rock killer cameltoe in a dress?

It’s been 7 months now. Where is chapter 4? Also, you really need to find a proofreader and/or editor. Clean up the grammar and punctuation. If you are aspiring to be a writer, that would be my first suggestion. I gave you 3 stars for now. I’ll be on the lookout for your future stories to see if there is any improvement. Good luck!