All Comments on 'Mind Control Harem Ch. 04: Bimbodoll'

by ObedientPetgirl

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FrognutFrognutabout 5 years ago
I love your Mind!

Each segment is more fun and I can't wait for the next one.

I think Tits could have gotten a little more attention in her part.

I would like to see Kitty gaining control over Bimbo so she has a stronger bond with Justin and a stronger feeling of self-worth to him!

As primary insecurity and jealousy could cause problems within the harem!

From your Story, I get the Felling Kitty is your "alter ego" if that is the case what a "Good Girl" you are for sharing your feelings with your readers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please keep making more!

The entire collection of stuff you’ve made is some of the best I’ve read on this site. Please make more, you are great at it!

Marklynda2Marklynda28 months ago

And the feminist falls to his will! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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