All Comments on 'Mindgames Ch. 17'

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RonanJWilkerson about 1 year ago

Wow. Loving the dynamic you built here.

Cindy1001 almost 2 years ago

As the previous commentator, but I see the risk of accusation of fraternisation, which adds a new layer of tension to the already intriguing story.

SolisB about 4 years ago

poor Animal

Relationships are hard, even when you have the whip. (Okay, "especially when you have the whip.") The tale improves, chapter by chapter, as the characters deepen. I'm looking forward to more.

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I am so excited to have finally published Mindgames, which is now available on Amazon here: https://www.amazon.com/Mindgames-Jasmine-Gold/dp/1097992349/ . It is the product of what I am told is my exuberantly dark imagination. I've literally been working on the book for d...

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