by *Eve*
That motherfucker is a fucking pysco, your a good writer man but this shits crazy make her kill herself or something.
Jake is crazy.....I mean super crazy....why did she run....this is a good story!
this story is kinda of creepy. also i wish that Narissa wouldn't be shared
Can hardly wait to see the next installment. So come on out of that state of confusion and give us a conclusion. Puhleeze Miss Eve!
Pleeeeasssseee i'm dying to know what happens next!
she was so close!!! ^_^. hopefully he'll soften up a bit. But goodnes i just love to hate this man. You know what you've got talent, their right this should be a novel.
I want to like him but it's hard to. I hate the mean way he treats her. I hope you'll be able to redeem him because he's sexy and they could be good together. This story sure has my attention. Eagerly awaiting the next episode.
Man, that really sucks she got caught. I was really hoping she could get away. And now he's pissed. Geez... I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter. I wish her the best of luck cuz she's going to need it. Jake is one scary bastard!
keep it coming!!! Wish I had your talent with words! I love it.
I've been following this story from the beginning and it keeps getting better. Keep it coming cause I'm hungry for more.
Ok he's hot,but he treats her so badly,it's scarey.I hope he learns to respect her more,cause right now,he doesn't have one redeeming quality except his good looks.
I have been waiting 4 a story like this. But I do hope she gets to kick his ass in the end, this guy is too much