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All Comments on 'Miss Secretary and Me Ch. 01'

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mammoetmammoetover 4 years ago
short but liked it a lot so far

keep going ch. 02 soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My 2 cents

Not a bad start. Looking forward to reading more and see where you take this. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good start

This is a good start but it would help if you got an editor or at least someone to weed out the inconsistencies.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Interesting characters, a good start. Just as I start to really get into it, it ended. :-(

Could use some editing, as has been pointed out. Please don’t let this story end!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story, but why did you stop?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jenna pulled down his pants and entered him? Lol what? Random pegging sentence?

tlevanssrtlevanssrover 1 year ago

You started good then just stopped. Are you going to start writing again or just quit like a lot of others do. You should finish this.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wonderful beginning, please write more chapters!

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