All Comments on 'Missed Mortgage Payments Ch. 04'
by 63luckyman
- 7 Comments
Coger86almost 3 years agoSorry about the confusion. Doing this on a cell phone is difficult due to the small lettering.
Please write more chapters in this ongoing story. Thanks for the fun adventure.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoMy wife paid a debt for me with her hot body. Except that it was "safe sex" with no exceptions. But with that she had to surrender to something she was not planning on. THANKS
dawg997almost 3 years agoYou do a good job of bringing out emotions in the characters, making the crazy story more believable.
Yes, it's fantasy, and since it is your story, you get to play out the fantasies while we observe.
The ongoing theme of a willing stripper whore wife is a pleasurable kink, you do a good job of expressing it and playing it out.
It seems that all the characters are getting what they ultimately want. 5/5 on all parts of the story so far!
CZOFTWover 2 years agoYour story is descriptive but not very sensual, it's almost clinical. Tell us what they're feeling and give some dialog to make it feel more like we're there rather than just being told about it. 4*
ToughSailor6 months agoAbout time it got down to the nitty gritty. Agree with previous comment about more detail during the actual sex. Small point of curiosity; Did you actually mean 'needed' instead of 'kneaded' with regards to playing with Tina's breasts?
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