All Comments on 'Missed Offense Ch. 02'

by ChaseQ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wild start, but the sinister part comes soon

A hot story in some ways, but I simply can't get around the calculated way Morgan's handled this.

This certainly sounds like a set up to trap Bob and Morgan into some sort of sexual slavery.

My take anyway,

Kydreamer

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I'm hooked!

I'm eager to see where this is going. You're doing a great job of writing.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Good, but could have been better

Brad needed to fuck her again, in front of his wife.

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