All Comments on 'Missy's Weekend In Hell Ch. 02'

Your story has a good start to it. Can'y ait to find out what Maria has in mind for Missy.

She should be dropped naked into a prison exercise yard when it's 10 below and windy

It's getting interesting, now! I was afraid Missy might turn out to be a willing participant...and that would spoil all the fun! Keep going, okay?

I am waiting for you to get somewhere on these stories. I am biased toward them just cause of your great photo- but so far nothing to get "excited" about

Enjoyed reading this story which has a somewhat plausible plot. Then I discovered it had no ending!!!!! That's cheating your readers. If you haven't completed a story, tell your readers up front. You are just suckering them in. You are wasting their time. That sucks big time.

please write an ending!

Very nice beginning, there´s more to tell, more explicit seducion, I come back for more!