All Comments on 'Mistress Doreen Ch. 01'

It's building into a good story, please continue.

This is a very good start. It seems like you are foreshadowing that Doreen will force Frank to do some things which will slowly creep into his home life and he will have to struggle to hide from his wife or make some difficult decisions. Doreen definitely seems like the type that will want to prove that her control goes beyond just when they are together.

Great start, I hope to head lots more.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Looking forward to reading more but so far this story mirrors my own wishes exactly. Wich I were Frank.

i am enjoying this story immensely, like Frank i find myself aroused and drawn to Mistress Doreen.

Beautifully and subtly erotic. Excellent. I shall immediately start looking for a Chapter Two.

Leo von Masoch

Very well written with a ton of allure waiting to see what dark erotic adventures Doreen will subject her slave to...love it. Never thought a story about a 75 year old would be arousing but it truly is...keep up the great writing!