by NMatBennR27
I enjoyed it quite a bit, but the ending (task 6) was waaaay too rushed. So much build up, then "oh, and they had sex, the end". You'd have done better to end on a cliffhanger then write a fuller narrative.
All in all, thanks though!
yep i liked it until she betrayed his trust, it does not mater what she did, she betrayed him.