All Comments on 'Mistress has Plans For Him'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I enjoyed it quite a bit, but the ending (task 6) was waaaay too rushed. So much build up, then "oh, and they had sex, the end". You'd have done better to end on a cliffhanger then write a fuller narrative.

All in all, thanks though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

yep i liked it until she betrayed his trust, it does not mater what she did, she betrayed him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pretty good story until the other guy showed up.

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With a lot of bottled-up feelings, I took to writing my feelings out and erotica lets me fantasize all I want and need to cope with stress.