All Comments on 'Mistress Returns'

It is good to see that Mistress is back with Darla. Looking forward to read more erotic stories from you. It is interesting with Joan and her slave involved in Darlas life.

Greeting

Thomas

i enjoyed reading this story. As a first-time reader of your writings, it took me some time to be sure what biological gender Darla was, but that didn't detract from my interest. I actually went to the author's page and saw the list of all the stories you have submitted, most, if not all, of them in the same series. I found the earliest one (Sept. 2021) and read enough of it to confirm who Darla was.

Having written a 33 chapter story for Literotica, I know the amount of work and dedication involved (although I found the process enjoyable.) I congratulate you on your accomplishment, and encourage you to continue writing, if not for this same storyline, then something new. Now I may just go back and read Darlas's story from the beginning

Trans and crossdressing are not really my kink, but this is so well written that it drew me in. Bondage is definitely one of my kinks, and the description in this is exquisite!