All Comments on 'Mistress X 05: Blackmail Contract'

"consensual blackmail is an acquired taste" NO, it's just utter madness.

You have some very unfortunate ideas about relationships, I hope your own life is somewhat better.

Great story-thank you! Your stories are fire! Please keep them coming!

The Mistress was so diabolical and conniving. So many good details about the Mistress’s use of technology to control the puppet!

The end where the Puppet must service Christy was especially yummy and hot: kind of like an erotic version of the “Twilight Zone!”

It all ended a bit quickly but other than that an absolutely superb story.

He hires a lawyer, goes to the cops and she goes to prison for 20 years. I'm STILL laughing at how bad this was. No wonder no one read it!

When You Wish For Willing Degradation,Sometimes It Ends Up Being Costly! However, You End Up Happy! -Well Directed!! Pure Luck

Good story, want more- maybe the ladies working together on him

Amazing! I never, I mean NEVER, bother to comment on stories, but when I happened to read a couple of negative comments I had to break silence and rave about this piece. It's literally the best erotica I've read online in years! It's like discovering a new music artist!

I'm a married lifestyle sub in a flatlined relationship, so obviously this story hit my sweet spot... and I also write as a hobby (a couple of pieces published, non BDSM or sex).I just want to say thank you, Long, for a piece that kept me hard and also satisfied the writer-critic in me. It's so rare!

I'm going to go read a couple of your other Mistress X stories before I, um, finish. :)

Be well,

david

it was consensual blackmail, but ultimately it wasn't consensual. She just blackmailed and exposed her client. It should stand as a warning to real life findom victims.

I thought the story was great. It did end too quickly. I hope part II is coming

Wonderful story! Blackmailing a guy is my go-to fantasy. I need to writ on this topic sometime soon.

sehr geile story, vielen dank.

FANTASY BUT INTERESTING at the same time because in a weird world, and we live in one, it’s not beyond possibility although if it was real life the blackmailers would inevitably come across a client who goes to the police and damn the consequences. But some readers need to remember it is just a story.

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I would have liked more pace to the story, the action seemed pedestrian at times, but that’s just my opinion, of course.

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I would have liked some involvement in proceedings from Christy, unbeknown to John, after her meeting Laura. Christy buying the contract didn’t need to be withheld from the reader just John. The ending suited the story nicely and didn’t need anything more.

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As someone who has visited many mistress’s over the years it made me think of thoughts I have before every meeting. Not when I first began visiting but after the first 4/5 and mainly concern about what might happen after being restrained.

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What if, for some unforeseen reason, the mistress can’t release you? Could be a failure in the mechanism or she has perhaps had an accident and needs medical attention but can’t make the call? What if she has a heart attack? After all it can happen to someone at any age.

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What if she takes photographs/videos without your knowledge and later uses them for blackmail? If I was female and had the body and talent to be a mistress I would certainly record the session because it’s not beyond the possibility the client would attack the mistress.

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I’ve seen a mistress from one in her mid-twenties to a lady who was 74 at the time but looked 54. She knew exactly what she was doing and I returned for a second session. Unfortunately she moved to another part of the country.

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I can’t be marked which has prevented corporal punishment. It was the mistress in her twenties, just before the pandemic, who solved the problem in a simple way. As a result I went home without being marked but with a very sore arse.

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Rightly or wrongly the anticipation a session has alway overridden my concerns but I can’t be the only one who’s had these thoughts.

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The vast majority of mistress’s won’t allow the taking of photographs or videos. Those that do tend to charge the equivelant, or more, of a standard hours fee but, if the client wants to, they provide a hood to try and hide his identity. When they do it’s usually because they want to put it on their website and pay to view.

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I have read some of your other stories, although not many, and have enjoyed them. I’ve often thought of adding a story around the theme of something going wrong, as I’ve described above, in a session to the stories under my other username. One day.

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Keep up the good work.

Really erotic story. Power over men is every woman's dream