All Comments on 'Modified Adverts Ch. 03'

What a pity this isn't illustrated.

Ive loved this story since the beginning. But now its just getting frustrating and close to being ridicules. 85% of the story is all about the ads and shows your modifying. Next to nothing is going on in the guys real life. Even when it does... he is only teased. Multiple occasions he has a perfect opportunity to engage in actual sex... but never does. He has been manipulating this collage and family for a YEAR and never once got laid. No one is THAT patient, much less a teenage male... The plot and concempt is amazing. But IMO you are focusing more on the manipulation than you are anything actually happening. Hell, you never even went back to the photoshoot with the Principal. More men on campus are obviously getting laid then the guy doing all the work,,,

Don't listen to any of those dumb criticisms in the previous chapters. This story is amazing! As a huge fan of the original story, I love what you are doing. I hope you keep it up!

This story is fire

I like the story and that whole scene on the couch is fire but there is too much focus on the ads and not enough on the actual story. Now I just skip all the ads part and try to just get the story itself.

Can the next part come out soon please!

i like the modifying ads fetish stuff :) also love that the chapters are long