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live4thebjlive4thebj7 months ago

This reads like stereo instructions. I couldn’t even make it halfway down page 1.

burgwadburgwad7 months agoAuthor

Thank you for commenting, and props for the BJ reference. I can't begrudge you the right to bail.

StrappySandalsStrappySandals7 months ago

I got thru page 1, only to find 6 more to go... Soooo much staccato banging was giving me a headache!!! I might come back though. Because as irritating as the writing style was, the story piqued my curiosity...

Whirling DervishWhirling Dervish7 months ago

Is this a story or a shopping list? Truly awful writing style.

burgwadburgwad7 months agoAuthor

Dervish, I understand completely. While I would argue it is a story, I admit that Mom does at one point get groceries. And Strappy, I hope you come back!

rahtruderrahtruder7 months ago

Excellent - different - well done

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