by Declandave
I really liked your story from beginning to end. There was a nice buildup from the moment Chloe met Amara. The action was erotically described with nice hot moments. However, I was disapointed with the end. I think it ended too soon. You could add many more chapters to Chloe's evolution within her new social network. I hope you will reconsider and continue the story. All in all ... I did like the story very much.