All Comments on 'Mom's Superpower -- Illustrated!'
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ipreferoral7 months agoSImple story, but just right. NGTVisualStudio is indeed a great illustrator. Maybe include a pointer to their work?
Alwaystaboo7 months agoIs the truest plus most erotic paragraph I've ever read. I been reinvest since 1974 and this holds a unique place in my heart like no other.
Perhaps because of envy.
DanDraper7 months agoAmazing story, loved the comic book angle here. Her body and sexuality were indeed a great superpower.
5-stars.
Anonymous7 months agoGreat story with a nice pace. I love the artwork. It really makes the story come alive. Can't wait to see more.
tjreader7 months agoI don't typically like the illustrated stories, but these illustrations were *really* good, and there weren't so many that it made reading the story difficult. The prose was good as always, from you HeyAll. I'd love to see another chapter outside of the contest. 5 stars! Good luck!
Paul4play7 months agoWell done!
Fun and arousing story line.
Sexy illustrations.
And the mother-son theme is double erotic!
Nikkiejanes7 months agoWell written story. The flow and pace was perfect. Sex was hot. i loved the internal dialogue of mom as she goes about things. 2 very lucky twins in my opinion.
I can't believe that a creative director in an advertising agency hadn't spotted her sons talents and encouraged them earlier.
Anonymous7 months ago★★★★★ Would love for this to not be the end, rather the first Chapter of a series.
Chapter 2. She gets home, the boys have created a huge pile of great art. Mom rewards them with more sex.
Chapter 3. One of the drawings showed the boys double teaming their hot MILF mom. So she takes them on at the same time in a DP, especially since one is in love with her ass.
Chapter 4. The girlfriend of the elder son stops by, and mom notes that she never realized how much the girl looked like a younger version of her!! The house reeks of sex, so the gf starts to get horny. Mom hasn't done girl-on-girl since college, they start on each other, the boys join in fora full blown orgy!
P7y1r4o7 months agoHm.. what can I say but, "Encore, Encore" as I feel that its not only well written w/ pics that match well. But I feel like it should continue, if not grow from here.
*Tho there's a hint of some kinda of causal loop in this story, I'm curious if her son's or maybe the clerk from the comic store created the 'Mom's Superpower' comic for this very purpose.. a sort of pay it forward type thing.
But whatever U decide, thanx for sharing this story.
Anonymous7 months agoEXCERPT FROM THE STORY.
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... Her huge breasts sway back and forth, in rhythm with the dynamic thrusts from her son. The muscles of her back and shoulders are tense. What a sight to behold. Landon takes pleasure in watching her dangling breasts and contorted face as Tyler goes to town with a jack-hammering cock.
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I gave you a 5 [4.75 = 95% (☆☆☆☆☆)].
Anonymous6 months agoFun story. Like many others I have been following your stories for multiple years. I appreciate your willingness to dive directly into the story without long windups. Good story but not the hottest one creation. Look forward to more. Thank you for your bountiful good work
Virrel6 months agoThis was absolutely incredible, I loved the whole plot and pacing of this, perfect and top notch.
The fact the story was so concise and focused made it more enjoyable not too much detail was given over any one aspect.
The characters were well written I get this wasn't about character development rather how you wrote the emotions, thoughts, expressions and reactions of each person really helped develop a strong picture of each character was like even with out the illustrations.
Also thank you for not being super literally descriptive about every aspect of their physical appearance and what they are doing, this is something many many authors lack the ability to do, tell how a character, looks, acts and behaves with out literally telling in the story, so was very much appreciated.
10/10.
Buster2U6 months ago10 Big Blazing Stars. LOL Great Fantasy Story. LOL The illustrations were great! The story a lot of fun. Unfortunately that wasn't me as one of those young men. LOL The story was fun, the idea cool, the images nice. This was an enjoyable read. Thank you. Buster2U
IreneGoodnight5 months agoHot story! Great illustrations as well. I was working in a men’s department store and one day twins came in looking for suits as they were soon to graduate from college and we going to interviews. There was some tailoring to be done and our policy was to delver their expensive purchases personally. They lived in an upscale apartment close by, so I got their address and told them I would be there after 6pm. These twins were hot and I was getting wetter just imagining them double teaming me.
After their clothes were ready, I called them and told them I was on my way. When i got to their apartment, I went straight in, kissed them both, asked where a bedroom was, went there, hung up their purchases, promptly stripped, and told them to come see their “goodies”.
We fucked the rest of that day and into the night. They loved my 34D tits, hot cunt, perfect ass…and their DP was awesome. The next morning at breakfast and in the nude, I coached them on interview skills, fucked both of them on the table, and then went home. I told them to call me the minute they got back from interviews and I would come over and “debrief” them.
When I arrived back at their place, they were naked, horny, and wasted no time in debriefing me…naked and soon fucking them both all night long!
DarkAurther69695 months agoWow that was really Good it got my Tiny Beta Cock Up, My Favorite Parts were that it was Really Well Written Coupled with Kick Ass Illustrations, and I Specially Loved the End "don't forget your dreams" Part that was really Nice of you. I even Loved how Unlike Most Author's You Used the word 'Contorted' instead of 'Screw' which is a bit of a Pet Peeve for me Personally, so a very Thank You For That. However I must Admit The Couple of things that I have a little bit a Grip with is, First is that I Feel Some Words could have been Put a Little Better...just slightly. Then there is that Fact I wished I knew Why Oliva Was Meant to Have Mom's Superpower's, it seems. Then that last Grip that I have is that the End There with the "Vote, Comment, Fallows" Really reminds me of the Good Old YouTube Bit of "Like, Comment And Subscribe" which...that's right you guess it Grip of mines.
And on a little bit of a Side Note I really Loved how you said that Giving Life and Nourishment is a Women's Super Power, as I believe that Not only Giving Birth and Nourishment is a Women's Super Power. But also In My Own Personal Opinion I feel that a Pregnant Mothers or even just an Image of a Mother In General With her Children No Matter the Age of the Said Children Is The Most Beautiful And All Of that In Addition to being The Most Purest Sight In The World.
Anonymous4 months agoChapter 2-Olivia gets pregnant from the fucking that her sons, Landon and Tyler gave her. Nine months after they fucked, Olivia gives birth to twins, one baby boy who looks just like Landon, and one baby girl who resembles Tyler.
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Anonymousabout 1 month agofor the super energy, Olivvia needs to have both of her sons in her at the same time. the artist of these Olivia characters has a very good imagination, and my type of DIRTY MIND! I love the series.
Anonymous7 days agoChapter 2 - That Friday night when Olivia came home, she told her twin sons Landon and Tyler to move all of their clothes into her bedroom and sleep with her in her king size bed. All three of them shower together that night before going to bed and both her sons Tyler and Landon fuck their mother Olivia again. They also fuck in bed that Friday night through Sunday night. Olivia misses her period later that week and her doctor confirms that she is pregnant after conducting a test. Nine months later, Olivia gives birth to twin daughters that are identical to their mother Olivia.
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