by MONALISALEE
the repeated and continuous use of inane dialogue, "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh oooooohhhhhhhhhhh." is stupid and most annoying. "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh oooooohhhhhhhhhhh." Whatever makes the author think it adds to the story, when in fact it is a major interruption and distraction, "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh oooooohhhhhhhhhhh." ? And most of all so childish ! "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh oooooohhhhhhhhhhh."