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impo_61about 9 years agoShe was a widow...Not a wife anymore!!!
She was a widow...Not a wife anymore!!! So wrong category...
francis_toliverabout 9 years agoWhat a mess
Beyond the switch in tenses and the fact that English does not appear to be the writers first language, the story is about a widow not a wife.
That doesn't even touch the dialog and so on. Ugh. What a mess.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoGet an editor
Then come up with a decent storyline. This was just plain awful.
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