All Comments on 'Monica'

4, Stars, a nice complex story, surely there is room for chapter 2 where the husband, now in congress finds out about his families going on with each other and uses this information to further his congressional career by having his wife do 'favors' to get him influence.

it seemed like less a story and more of a synopsis. A blow by blow report. Kinda distant and detached like u were reporting for the paper. I did like it. It just needs more dialogue and a sense of things, u know?