All Comments on 'Moon Witch Ch. 05'

So glad to see the next installment! You’ve done a great job writing a character who enjoys the sex, but her whole personality isn’t changed by it. Can’t wait for the next one.

Since she has not had barren tea yet, I hope she is pregnant right now.

I love this story. It has so much potential. I could see her going from helpless slave to powerful witch.

Wish these chapters came quicker. It was worth waiting for, though. I'll be patiently waiting for the next!

So hot. Not a big fan of whips personally, but tied down and licked? So hot.

Wonderful tale. I echo the sentiments expressed by some already, that although she enjoyed (mostly and drugged anyway) she hasn't lost herself to it. I don't like pain at all but we are in the NC category so its somewhat expected. Was there a glimpse of her potential power where she could enter/influence dreams? Or am I reading too much into it?

So looking forward to next chapter! Please don't keep us waiting too long! :)

Thanks for your patience! Chapter 6 is pending and should be published soon. I'm definitely learning a lot about character building through this project, so hearing all of your thoughts on what's working/not working is helping me become a better writer :)

You should write more. You definitely have what I would say is an extraordinary imagination. Good luck to you in the future, and don't quit writing!