All Comments on 'Moonlight Becomes You'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Who are these idiots reading and commenting on swinging stories just to bash the concept? Why are you reading stuff that doesn't appeal to you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Felt I needed to comment because the story was erotic and well written, and seems to have attracted a number of comments which make little sense. It’s difficult to write anything new about two couples playing strip poker, but this was nicely put together, well paced, and the voyeur piece added to the eroticism and believability. Thanks for writing - it was among the best on it’s subject.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Glad you've erased the negative comments. This is a very hot story about voyeurism and first partner swapping, much appreciated.

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Married lover of erotic stories, films. I really enjoy watching short films and reading stories with my wife. We love to read stories together as she lays on her tummy over some cushions raising her hips with her thighs slighly spread. As the story progesses I squeeze her chee...