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Ha! Loved the idea!

You remain one of my favorite writers on this site. The level of visceral detain you provide while showing a transformation is always a treat. Thank you again.

Thank you both!

And, @notbreckenridge, that is amazing praise coming from someone with just about all "Hot" stories posted on their profile. I really appreciate the compliment!

You really know how to create an incredible visual effect from that strategically chosen words which have to be your normal descriptive nature by the way you peel off the perfect words in your stories. They are so beautifully nuanced that it brings me back time and again to enjoy getting lost in the worlds you create. Thank you so much for your continuous efforts to bring forth another well crafted piece of work.

Mark S Mann