All Comments on 'Morning at the Lake'

by gypsydriver

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very nice!

A tad short, but sweet and sexy, with him spanking her and her being a real "loving wife", not the fake ones in most of this section! Plus, the present tense helps with the rhythm of this tale.

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