All Comments on 'Morning Diversions'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great work can’t wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Skipped to the end from somewhere on Page 1...

Can't believe that there are 4 Pages of this CRAP!!!

Have been a Huge fan of JLH for decades, but literally can't count the mistakes!

Not leaving my Email here, but wish there was a way to be notified of a reply or something, so I could offer you to proofread etc.!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago
excellent drama

This is the third part of an ongoing saga, which began with the story Sauna Time Fun and continued with Repair Job Rendezvous. This reviewer strongly recommends reading the previous two stories before this one, as each story builds upon the previous. This third story is just as compelling as the previous two, with the same strong characters and compelling plot. In the opinion of this reviewer, (especially given some of the comments) this story would be more effective if it had been written in the third person, but even as it is, it is a powerful drama, full of emotion and passion. This story is followed by the equally compelling Secret Liaisons. Five Stars.

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