All Comments on 'Morning Memories'

by JupiterMars

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yowseryowserabout 3 years ago

Short little mosaic

These 750 word excercises are so challenging. You are the center of this Jungian four-women dream-cycle, and it is just so difficult to pull off a unified, satisfying tale. Might be fun to do a full-length piece on each of your paramours. Just because now you've got us interested...

AlinaXAlinaXabout 3 years ago

This was fun, and well done. A lazy, drifting train of thought...

GinloverGinloverabout 3 years ago

Brilliant way to capture the disjointed thoughts used by many people in masturbation

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I am a hobbyist writer slowly working my way through all of the story categories. I am trying different genres, different settings and different time periods. Constructive feedback always welcome.