by sshamdan96
its sometimes different to understand that people from India view their lives dissimilar than ithers. the writing and thoughts seem to have another meaning.
There is a standard convention for writing speech, why not learn it and use it?
Most readers don't even read these fetish fantasies, a quick skim, the tags and the negative feedback. Change the category or the theme for a better feedback.
Thank you for the feedback. Sorry for the delay in Part 2. Will post Part 2 and Part 3 shortly. A few points to share:
1) This is not a fetish story completely.
2) Like any other country, stories based on Indian characters have to follow Indian nuances. Some readers may find it difficult to understand.
Thanks for your time!
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