All Comments on 'Most Welcome, Dear! Pt. 01'

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Cuckyboy3Cuckyboy39 months ago

Lovely. Time to visit Jijaji for a threesome !

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fetish fantasies should stay in the Fetish category.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

No need for part 2! We all know where this is going!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

its sometimes different to understand that people from India view their lives dissimilar than ithers. the writing and thoughts seem to have another meaning.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

There is a standard convention for writing speech, why not learn it and use it?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Badly thought out, poorly written and bad people.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Most readers don't even read these fetish fantasies, a quick skim, the tags and the negative feedback. Change the category or the theme for a better feedback.

Nawtishikz69Nawtishikz698 months ago

Excellent build up. How about writing part 2?

sshamdan96sshamdan965 months agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback. Sorry for the delay in Part 2. Will post Part 2 and Part 3 shortly. A few points to share:

1) This is not a fetish story completely.

2) Like any other country, stories based on Indian characters have to follow Indian nuances. Some readers may find it difficult to understand.

Thanks for your time!

SS

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Enthusiastic writer. Want to take my readers on a pleasant journey away from reality for a refreshing break.