All Comments on 'Mother Falls to Daughter’s BF Ch. 05'

Dude. You want us to believe that Jane is an 11 out of 10 and that every guy wants her but you’ve been dating her for 6 months.

It doesn’t matter how hot a person is, there’s ALWAYS someone hotter.

So he’s the quarterback. So he’s a 3rd or 4th year which also means he’s a draft prospect. Which means he’s not playing college ball for fun, he wants it as his career. Every waking minute would be focused on football. Exercise. Eating right. Parties? Sure; but not the night before a game.

Now, colleges have thousands of students. Jane is not hotter than all the rest of the women and certainly not everyone would care.

At that point I stopped reading. Because if you can’t even set the tone right, everything else is going to be equally bullshit and why waste my time? You’ve obviously wasted yours.

In the future, IF you write a story, actually imagine how it is going to look. If you feed someone shit, the smell and taste will make them throw up. If you fuck a virgin ass, there is going to be blood and, especially if you’re not careful, a risk of a bad infection. Having your asshole sewn up and being forced to wear a colostomy bag while it heals sucks.

I absolutely love the idea of the quarterback stud licking his balls and sucking his cock clean, I would have liked some more background where maybe the group planned it all to happen, but either way I came no hands in my pants, something I haven’t done in a lifetime

Great story. Is there going to be slemthng with the last girl?

I didn’t expect the all American boy to lick balls and suck cock but I gotta admit, I loved it, makes me want you to reintroduce the mother with the father who ends up turning in front of all his women in the family, that to me would be hot as hell, great job

I did not see that coming man, I read the story word for word and the build up was a real surprised, I suprised myself jerking to the thought(fuck the anticipation) of the white boy sucking cock in front of his girlfriend, fucking awesome, hope your happy I blew my load thinking about this football star being turned by a big dick, never thought I’d get off on it till you wrote it, great job

Yes it was awesome story yes it was embarrassing to cum to it but yes I did, and just read it a second time