All Comments on 'Motherly Grudge Ch. 02'

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PhilipInzaghiPhilipInzaghiover 4 years ago

This is awesome. A little sisters rivalry. I hope you will also make them do a little with each other :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wonderful love

I like this Wonderful lusty love story. I wish he submit to his masculine mother fully. Live happily ever after as her wife . Mom start growing natural body hair like small mustache and beard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Absolutely amazing

I love your stories the most, I was waiting for so long for new chapters to come and it was an amazing read <3 I can't wait for more chapters/more of your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
AWSOME

please for all that is good in the world, continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

maybe she will explain what is going on with her and her sister

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
only problem

when she enters him you say her balls touch his unless his balls are below his ass hole that dosnt work other than that it was amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

You should please please please continue this, really loved this..!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I wanna know what the guy from the first chapter was so angry about.

I'm guessing it's incest, some people just lose their fucking minds at the idea,

I saw one guy actually say that it was worse than child pornography.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Envious

I wish I had a woman like that to take me over and over again

zzingo99zzingo99about 4 years ago
Another good one

Lovely

dammit51dammit51almost 4 years ago
More please!

I would really love another chapter ! What are the odds it could be done this year?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another!

Really hope thereโ€™s another chapter! Would love to see some more manipulation even. ๐Ÿ’•

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Id love some more chapters. Possibly showing what life is like now that they have sex.

totostorytotostoryover 3 years ago
Next chapter please

Me and I think your fans waiting for the next chapter . I don`t know what happened with her sister , also I like to see competition , Jealous between sisters , they should make sure it will be a difficult choice for Cole. are you willing to continue this fantastic story?

totostorytotostoryover 3 years ago
Recommendation for similar story

If anyone Know similar story Mom with dick /son , please recommend to me. Of course including the kinky dialogues

WestfjordianWestfjordianabout 3 years ago

I loved this one even more than part 1! Five stars, all the way!

I would absolutely love to see the sisters compete, to try and have Cole decide which cock feels better in his ass. Does he like the taste of his mother's cum better than that of his aunt, or vice versa? Eventually, the sisters realize he cannot choose between them, and they decide to share.

I know I'll love whatever you come up with, this was just an idea :)

Client8Client8almost 3 years ago

Took a bit long of a build up but ended passionately. Good jib!

WeezyfWeezyfalmost 3 years ago

So the sisters probably fuck each other as well or something? Or share other people between them?

WeezyfWeezyfover 2 years ago

why was his mom always so irritated bad mood? Because of her feelings for him?

Whyd she never open up to him? The part about helping her bad moods/vleaning/ making life easier her +/ the attraction she had for him maybe

The way he was resisting her for so long and all his disgust and shame and stuff.. wayyy to much. I mean if it was before the aunt thing okay but he admitted he liked it, he wanted more of his aunt so why did he resist the mom so much.

His mom was clearly desperate for his attention, why didnt he compliment her breasts/figure etc. Why only admire her in his head lol.

The mom clearly loved seeing his dick, why didnt she mention that? She also liked his hair/his body/everything.. but the only she complimented was his asshole saying she wanted to eat him up. Why didnt she just do that? A nice rimjob preparation for the assfucking. Maybe a blowjob for him since she liked his cock so much?

If these points could be adressed in next chapters where she shows him just how much more she loves him than the aunt would be nice.

Howd the aunt know she wouldnt mind sharing btw? Her innertoughts wouldve been nice to know at that point.

This dudes feelings are all over the place, way to much, like fear panic shame disgust horny curious etc, choose 1 or 2 lol. Also he didnt feel emasculated or inferior? How come not, she literally pressed her dick on top of his in a comparison position.. its like she meant to make him clear how inferior he is, not that i liked it but it wouldve been a natural reaction on his part considering how weak of a guy he is

After she compared herself to him on how she is a top and he her bottom she said She couldn't trust anybody else to provide him with as much pleasure and happiness as she could give him. โ€œ this insinuates that sucking his dick or allowing him to fuck her isnt pleasurable for him so she wont do it? Wtf selfish! The way she rationalized is understandable but still she could ask him or offer it.. sigh every futa always selfish even when they love the person and not just another cocksleeve

It says here again that he was stressed from living with his gloomy mother and the fucking helped him relax from that, again why was she always so gloomy? Maybe i missed it, ill reread ch1 later.

She sounds almost more insecure then him when she says โ€œ Christina turned to him, nuzzling his hair softly. "Thank you for accepting me, Cole..." she cooed. "I love you so, so much..."โ€ so wholesome her love for him, i like it. Even thos shes selfish in the way she pleasures him she still really lusts for him and loves him.

The state she was in was like that of a zombie, fueled only by lust and love for her son, and a desire to show him just how deep said love was.

Damnit she is so lovely. And the dudes rejection and hesitation is so damn annoying! Like you love the sex , you love your mom, you love her body, you love everything then where is his damn resistance/disgust/hesitation coming from and why is it so strong that even after he admitted he loved it he still tried to fight her away after orgasm. I have never seen a more annoying moral compass in smut.

Or maybe this was all done so that the mom has a chance to keep seducing him over and over and making us like her more and more? Well done.

I liked this ch way more then ch1 the only real turn offs for me were that his dick didnt get any attention and his annoying moral compass. I hope next chapter he will go to the aunt and the. She begs him to stay longer and the mom begs him to come back and theyll compete for him and offer him stuff in return like sucking his dick whenever he wants or whatever stuff like that could be fun

animal99animal99over 2 years ago

I enjoyed your story but it seems a chapter is due whereby Cole and his mom's sister, Monica have another moment together. He obviously enjoyed his time with her and so his mind must wonder what it would be like to be with her, like he was with his mom.

But in the end, he loves them both and realizes he can't choose one over another - and offers to be with both. In the end, he loves them both and loves how his body responds to their separate styles of love-making. They in turn can't bear to be without him and decide to share him, together in the same bed, one time to celebrate their new Shared lover. One night of many more to come, separately or together.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 2 years ago

I don't know what the Anon said but

I probably agree only not as harshly as most Anon post of that type. I don't have a problem with the futa sex, or the incest, but I do have a big problem with RAPE. and this went beyond non-con or even dub-con this was just coercion and at the end RAPE pure and simple. Bad thing is I don't even feel sorry for the MC that was the RAPE victim. The guy had no backbone and was an unlikable character to me. What happened to him in both parts was wrong and should have never happened, but I just didn't care about him enough for it to matter.

QueenNovels1QueenNovels1almost 2 years ago

Where is the next chapter... I need more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I liked the first part alot more, maybe it's just that I prefer Monica's demeanor and the build-up was a lot better.

The smut was well-written and pushed some buttons of mine, but only when I actively tried to forget everything she'd said beforehand. Every bit of coercion in this part just felt slimy and made me dislike the mother - her thought process is honestly just awful and made me feel bad for the kid.

Maybe I just wanted to see her show some respect for what he wanted, ah well.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

As far as having an Anon comment removed, allegedly by the moderators, (you can do it yourself, which I suspect is what happened) if you can't take the heat, stay out of the kitchen.

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