All Comments on 'Motherly Lust, The Book of Evil Ch. 05'

by KinkyWritingPractice

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blaster666blaster6668 months ago

???? Don't get it.

OI8U2OI8U28 months ago

Another winner! When my cock is being ridden, I love to look at and play with tits and nipples.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Okay, don't stop. This is smoking hot stuff!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Looking for more, a new story that follows on from this, that gets the wife. That gets her in lust, in submission, in change, in service to them both.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story, but it needs more to finish up! Please do more chapters

Etrigan32Etrigan328 months ago

The only thing I'll criticize you for is that you've left all of us on the edge with far too many juicy pieces! Please, give us more, the story is awesome and hot.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Continue plz maybe have mother and son drain the life force from there spouse to further fuel their sexual desires and transformation into demon and have him breed her

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Damn, thus is a great story! Pull Tracy into this curse with the mother and son.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Interesting, I would've liked to have seen more about the physical changes earlier on but an interesting take so far.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wonderful series. If there was one more part, I would love to see what happens. Keep doing what you do

Red_22bRed_22b8 months ago

Ignore those who want to write the end of your story. This is awesome!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I'd love to see another chapter their transformation has given the book what it wanted and so it returned them back in time to before they found the book, they don't remember anything, but when they see the book they have a very vague memory of something that happened. Not of what they did, but how they felt. They want each other again, but don't know that the other wants them too.

Basically the second stage of the test from the book.

This time they aren't forced by the book to have sex, they want it and slowly work towards it.

This time there's more sneaking around and more risk taking.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Chapter 1 is missing?

KinkyWritingPracticeKinkyWritingPractice8 months agoAuthor

For anyone wondering, the sixth and probably final chapter is coming. I’m working on it right now, just got hung up on another completely different story and some real life stuff. I didn’t have any time to write.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Can you re-up chapter one?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Mom and son humiliating wifey . . . Can it get any hotter? If she’s dominated like a slave?

MyEmbryoMyEmbryo7 months ago

A hot and satisfying tale of a mother disrespecting her DIL. The ultimate in a mothers love for her son. Does or can this happen? Mom would have to be hot. Or perhaps a hot mother in law? We’ll done KWP

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

How dare you tease us with the promise of another chapter? Please sir….we all need closure

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