Mountain Bachelor Ch. 02

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Rupert's heart jumped. She was removing his underwear using her foot and his manhood was about to be out in the open, for the grand, planned, and wanted explosion.

She was trying not to touch his dick, to give him a good final. She managed to lower the underwear to a level where her foot was under his balls. She probably accidentally scratched his ball sack with her toenails because he jumped and they both giggled in the dark. Rupert's giggle sounded a bit nervous. He helped her by lowering his underwear down to his thighs.

She repositioned herself and started to use her both feet. She was gently moving her one foot on his testicles and the other on the bottom of his cock.

She admired the rigid large cock of her man, feeling it with her feet. They both didn't see anything but they were aware of everything that was going on. She finally started to stroke his cock with her foot and then with both her feet. She was glad that it was dark because that had to be a ridiculous sight if he could see her doing that.

When she felt that he was breathing heavily, she moved her feet above, to the head of his cock. She was pressing, releasing, moving her feet up and down and he finally started to cum, howling. She thought that if the moonlight didn't go away, this was going to be a sight to remember. 'My wolf', she thought.

Rupert couldn't shake this ecstatic state off of him for a period. He was still feeling the pleasure and the touch of Greta's feet. Those delicate beauties were still on his manhood, moving up and down slowly, covered with his seeds.

Greta was also amazed at what they did. The events of that night were very spontaneous, developing in a natural flow. They both felt very satisfied and they both felt that they achieved a lot that night. She knew what she wanted next and she also knew that there would be many other things like what she wanted.

They both felt that this was the beginning of a lifetime of countless possibilities for them.

They both wondered what else there was to be found out.

Rupert was smelling Greta's hair when he fell asleep, as he did every night.

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LitstoriesloverLitstorieslover8 months ago

I love doggy style, but I'm hopeful her disdain for it means that there won't be an anal sex in the future to ruin everything. I'd loved for her to try doggy style tho but strictly for piv. And, hopefully they can work out the language barrier issue soon and have more intimate sex.

theyRuletheyRuleabout 2 years agoAuthor

:) I love the comments, thank you.

First, I need to confess that I find writing in this category a bit more hard. As I mentioned before, I'm new in writing and I am happy to see that different categories have different readers, with different expectations. Probably, the readers who liked my previous series would beat me up telling me that she was going too easy on the guy :)))

I am trying and will try more to keep the story going, considering these comments. I'm planning to go slow by the help of short term unhappy events some more, resulting where they are not 50/50, in a way that they are 1.

David_Brock and Harga:

Haven't we all suffered from that 80/20 time to time? Especially due to the fact that the other side didn't even move a finger to deserve their 50 share (I'm talking in general, for both women and men). I care about the intention and effort, more than the balance itself.

In this story, the main outline is different than that. The girl is as much eager as her husband is, to be together and meet somewhere in the middle. She is trying to find out his and her limits, wants him to stop worrying about things and let it go, let himself go in his loving wife's arms. Not as real life 'always take by ladle, return by spoon' crap.

She's twisting him up for no good reason because she's a woman :) No ill intentions, it's a cat / dog story.

I have to remind that the girl is as novice as the guy, when it comes to relationships and she has past issues. I see your point and I believe that this equal treatment will find its way through their grinding each other's edges.

They need time to learn.

Thank you for your thoughts.

HargaHargaabout 2 years ago

Great story but at this point she has to know this guy doesn't know shit and she's just twisting him up for no good reason. I didn't like the bitch comments at first but I'm starting to see it.

David_BrockDavid_Brockabout 2 years ago

Sorry, couldn't even get through half of chapter 2. If the good guy is punished far past minor misunderstandings and the Woman gains more power in the relationship because of her misunderstandings I have to cry. She says "she want's "equal" treatmeant. But really she want's an 80/20 split, even if he gets much. Being an older guy (57), I stopped dating and resigned myself to die alone. None of the women I dated had any concept of compromise. It was their way or the hi-way. That's not looking for love, it's looking for power. To me from what I read, this should have been in the "Non-Con" or "BDSM". I'm going to try and finish the chapter, but I don't really know if I can.

theyRuletheyRuleabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your kind comments.

Rusty_M:

I agree, but they need a little bit more time and some more misunderstanding due to lack of communication. And Rupert's mistakes, of course. This way, they are finding ways to discover and outrun each other and themselves, or let me say, their self-awareness. They are loving each other more after each incident, learning about each other.

Otherwise, it isn't possible for me to keep the story going a few chapters more, being a newbie at story writing myself. But we are on the same page about their destination, I'm just slowing it down a bit and trying to make it more fruitful.

Thank you

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