All Comments on 'Mouse to Goddess Ch. 02 - Pet, Slut, Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The plot line is now messed up. No more revenge since slut wants to be used and gave herself to the marine. Why add another character with the artist. 2 characters to train: slut and pet and how they evolved would have been a good story. Now we are in college with an extra character (not in college) and the story is over.

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