All Comments on 'Moving On Ch. 01'

Very good start in developing the characters, the life events leading up to the current situation and a developing relationship. Now all that is needed is a continuation of this romantic love story if that is where you are heading. You have captured my attention and I am perhaps a romanticist eager to hear more about this renewed friendship. Oh the possibilities. More please. During these times of uncertainty, Love is a wonderful thing to hold close to ones heart. Please, let the games of passion proceed.

OK Lola you seem to have some positive writing talent, let's see you take this story line into some chapters and make us add you to our favorites! Bravo so far!

Chloe sounds like a hottie, you looking in a mirror? Hmmmmm... The clothes were attention getting without a doubt.