All Comments on 'Mr. Crowell'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sexy, well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This was hot to read, wow. Well written. I love your works.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sexy tale, thank you for sharing.

shadysweetshadysweetabout 2 years agoAuthor

Just a few minor errors that can be easily fixed with an editor. Aside from that, great story. Hot, smoldering.

EarlyDawn1973EarlyDawn1973about 2 years ago

Yes, very well written. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I came once per page, so it's been a good morning! It's rare that a story so short really does it for me, but it was perfect. Great Dom-sub dynamic, he's kinky and authoritative but actually still cares about her pleasure and well-being, which is missing from a lot of stories. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you!

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An average girl that loves writing average stories. Short stories are my favorite to write. Although, I do like writing chaptered novels as well. I have two dogs named Marley and Kato, and two cats named Theo and Sassy. They are my life. I also love critique, blunt and honest.