by shadysweet
Just a few minor errors that can be easily fixed with an editor. Aside from that, great story. Hot, smoldering.
I came once per page, so it's been a good morning! It's rare that a story so short really does it for me, but it was perfect. Great Dom-sub dynamic, he's kinky and authoritative but actually still cares about her pleasure and well-being, which is missing from a lot of stories. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you!