All Comments on 'Mr. Johnson's Secretary'

Not very believable, predictable but cute. Except it REALLY needed proofreading. Too many errors were distracting. Don’t rely on spell check. That results in the wrong word correctly spelled.

Not a romance story.

Terrible. Didn’t finish it,

Generally a good read. A little more expansion description of the sex in the elevator and how that felt different and worrying about the lift possibly moving or the lift repairman opening a roof hatch would have spiced up that part of the story a lot.

The last couple of lines didn't connect all the loose ends together very well. Was he the CEO?

Good first story!

4

CEO still reports to Chairman or owner.

I thought it was fine. Maybe a bit rushed and a bit early to call it romance, but well written nevertheless.

5*

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