by holden_2005
***Nice start! no pun intended here, but it Petered out at the end. Thanks for the read.
I'm not quite sure why this is in the mature category. Okay, she's older, that doesn't necessarily mean she's old enough to be in the mature category. Erotic couplings would have been a better fit. Had you taken the time to suss things out and provide a bit more detail it could have been a good story. As it is, meh. 2*
It's alright, outside of a few obvious mistakes, like "...we passed on their way out the door."
Good premise.
At least a full scene/incident this time.
Presumably there'll be more. Hope so. He needs to be taught.
She's nw his boss? Huh? That's all there is to say about it? No explanation of what his job is? How she came to be his boss? How long she's been his boss? Is she still married?
Nevertheless, very hot.
Five stars.
I want to say this was a great start because I'm hoping there will be more to come. Mrs. Robinson needs a "boyfriend"!