All Comments on 'Ms Coney Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Another awesome story

I'd love to see you do a huge multi chapter version of this, or the landlady series. You're definitely one of my favorite writers.

BurbankReaderBurbankReaderalmost 8 years ago
Conditioning

I really love how she is taking charge of this guy for her pleasure! So exciting! Thank you!

maddictmaddictover 5 years ago
I'm all in

What better for control than a silk leash. Dominic be vlad its not hemp. I know a way to go deeper, Ms Coney you might not have the stomach for it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Premise still good.

But story lags.

Among other things, the dialog is really stilted.

And it's still basically just more of the same. He fucks her. OK. But where are the details? Is she naked? What does she look like naked? Does he get to play with her boobs? What's that like? To her? To him?

Doesn't she ever do anything to/with his cock? His balls?

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful. I want to see a series on landlady with around 20 or more of landlady's friends facesit in one night orgy

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Active imagination, sated somewhat by the odd story submission. A lot of my themes are oral (mostly for the woman) and sensual worship with elements of dominance particularly mentally and verbally and submission as well as regular sex. After being asked to write on some theme...

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