All Comments on 'Mum's Hotel Ch. 04'

Keep this going well written story 5 Stars

Super story I love how this is developing 5 Stars

You have the punctuation sorted. Great story 5 Stars

This is warming up to be a great story 5/5

Dr beulahthemick; For God's sake get an editor, there are so many errors it's embarrassing, and good story spoilt.

4 chapters, no incest....

Love where this story seems to be going. Extremely erotic.

I love where this story is going. 5 stars

Kinda naive style of writing - people just don't talk to each other like that. Less than erotic and won't make the blood flow to the right places. And yes, lots of spelling and grammatical errors. Not worth better than average star. Sorry, but bravo anyway.

Love your stories! I can't wait to read the next one.