All Comments on 'My 18 Year Old Amish Stud Pt. 01'

This was hot and a little lecherous from the protagonist's point of view. But it was also rather sweet, in the way a story about awakening an innocent's desires for forbidden sexual pleasures can be. Part 1 was well done, looking forward to finding out where this goes from here.

More please! Cut? Obviously not shaved downstairs. Has he messed around with boys?

More please. It would be cool to hear what the 18 y/o is thinking. Is he struggling with his faith, had he already been reconsidering leaving the community even though he already made that decision to stay 3-4 years ago when they are encouraged to sow some wild oats.

This was interesting and way too short. It demands further exploration with some thoughts from Irwin's perspective.

As a (mostly) age appropriate writer and lover...it certainly was fun to imagine myself, as I read your story, in the role of seducer...but at an age close to Irvin. It could help make up for many missed opportunities of mine at that age. BTW, I just assumed 'you', the seducer, to be much older than Irvin. Maybe some more background about the two, in a second part, would be helpful. Good start. '5' 'Follow Author'.