All Comments on 'My Adventure into Bondage'

The way that you wrote the story was interesting. You managed to keep me on edge the entire time waiting for the axe to fall. I thought for sure that this was going to turn out very bad for Susan. It seemed even more dicey when the 2 neighbors showed up with the mention of the woods or the barn. Overall I really enjoyed the story and some the scenes were hot. The only problem that bothered me was the punctuation. There was commas all over the place and periods where they made no sense. Once I just ignored the punctuation completely, it was doable. If you correct that then everything should be fine. Good job.

I loved every minute and inch of it. And long to have some man do the same things to me that Paul did to Susan.